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Monday, August 12, 2013

Book report: 2312 by Kim Stanley Robinson

I wanted to love this book. I wanted to appreciate Robinson's grand-scale worldbuilding, his fluidly descriptive prose, and his ability to weave an ensemble cast of characters and storylines into an epic whole.

After all, I enjoyed Red Mars.

I did not enjoy 2312.

The shortcomings are as much a case of what was excessive as what was lacking. Anyone who wants to see what the solar system might look like in three hundred years won't be disappointed. Robinson describes a moving city on Mercury, hollowed asteroids that serve as combination transports and habitats, and terraforming projects on half a dozen moons. Like his future society, Robinson wants to fill up every blank corner of his solar system, and much is left behind in the process. Unfortunately, it's frequently the characters.

Spending time with the characters of 2312 was like visiting crazy relatives. You see them after a long absence and suddenly remember why you didn't miss them in the first place. Then, just as you're spending enough time with them to start brushing off some of the less egregious weirdness, you depart and remember that they have nothing to do with the other 364 days of your year.

It's kind of like that.

Swan Er Hong, the mercurial performance artist from Mercury (see what he did there?) is the principal protagonist and our first introduction to the people of 2312. It's a shame, because while she could have been a fascinating and complex character, she is most often simply irritating. While I spent more time with Swan than I would have liked, I never felt like I got to know her well enough to sympathize with her. As a result, her many mood swings and extremes either baffled me or compounded my idea of her as shallow, self-absorbed, and flighty.* She actually threatens to scream when other characters refuse to tell her something she wants to know.

Most of the other characters weren't much more interesting or weren't around often enough to salvage the story. My favorite character was probably Inspector Jean Genette, a detective and a member of a group known as "smalls" who, for reasons left (surprisingly) unexplained, are all extremely petite.**

Kiran's subplot was also well-done, mostly because Robinson really captured the disorientation of someone who is in over his head, stuck in a plot that he isn't able to follow. Then again, maybe I just liked that story because it felt relatable while I was reading this book.

Frequently, characters' conversations about things that appear to be crucial plot points and themes (see: revolution) seem so general and so disassociated from any actionable context as to seem irrelevant. It's as if readers are hurtling along on one of those orbiting asteroid terrariums, and every once in a while we swing back into view of the characters just to see what they're up to before taking off again. After having a lengthy conversation with her computer about the historical contexts and causes of "revolutions" (virtually any kind you fancy), Swan then goes on to have a vague (yet nonetheless heated) conversation with Wahram about fomenting an actual revolution. Moments like these felt like they should have been better connected. As it is, it often feels like we're wandering from one event to the next, often without a great deal of causality or explanation.***

And during our many sabbaticals from the characters and their stories, we're treated to some rather bizarre infodumps. These are mini-chapters, and they may be titled "Lists," in which case they are actual lists of things: disorders, famous women, ways that Swan has mortified her flesh in the name of performance art. Others are "Extracts," which read like segments cut (often mid-paragraph) from textbooks on the science and history that underpins 2312, and yep, they're generally about as interesting as they sound. Still others are lengthy descriptions of planets, moons, asteroids, and other heavenly bodies, and I might have appreciated these more if there weren't so many seeming non-sequitirs. It's frustrating to see a writer as skilled as Robinson rely on such a sloppy method of worldbuilding.

The irony is that many of the infodumps state that the year 2312 will be the dawn of a new era. Unfortunately, the story feels like too much of an afterthought for me to care or understand why.

                
2312 if you dare. But I'd go with Red Mars instead.


*Like the moment she suggests self-crucifixion as a memorial to her burned city contrasted with her horror at remembering that time she ingested alien bacteria. And yet she has no qualms or regrets about having a permanent hormone drip implanted, having part of a bird's brain attached to her own, or having a quantum computer embedded near her skull.

**Best guess? Something to do with successive generations changing under the effects different gravities and environments. There are also "talls."

***For instance... why the heck did they start rebuilding Terminator halfway through? Wasn't it already established that there was no way to prevent a repeat catastrophe until they figured out whodunnit?

Wednesday, May 8, 2013

Book report: Shantaram, or The Armed Robber with a Heart of Gold

After hearing many recommendations for Shantaram, I finally got around to reading it. It's the story of a man who escapes from prison in Australia and flees to Bombay, written by a man who escaped from prison in Australia and fled to Bombay.

The verdict? Not fantastic, but pretty good.

Author Gregory David Roberts employs a vivid cast of characters and keeps them moving in a variety of plot lines. The novel is more about the protagonist and his friendships and epiphanies than it is about a particular string of events, so it's the kind of book that often feels (like the protagonist) like it's just following one moment into the next. But the progress is consistent enough, and the actions and situations are varied enough, that this wasn't a problem.

However, 1000-page novels run the risk of feeling too long, and this one might have been a tighter and more enjoyable read with a few hundred pages shaved off. Some supersized novels I'm sorry to finish and others I'm relieved to complete, and the difference lies in the nature of the excess; some are long because there are so many different things happening (and often with so many different characters), and others are long because the action is fluffed out with lots of navel gazing. Unfortunately, Shantaram is of the latter type.

The style is hyperbolical in the extreme. It's kind of hard to avoid the comparison with Bollywood movies. Every friendship is a brogasm, and every woman is a Helen of Troy. Lin, the protagonist, coasts on epic (and ever-shifting) tides of love, grief, fury, and beatific stoicism. Each of Lin's friends seems to inspire a moment (at least one) that makes Lin realize that he loves him like a brother. He mourns and forgives losses and transgressions so many times, and so intensely, that I frequently found myself wondering if I was re-reading pages or if Lin had the memory of a goldfish. I like drama, but Lin seems to be in a state of constant emotional climax. When everything's amped up to 11, it makes me deaf.

Speaking of climaxes. Every instance of lovemaking in the book is an ejaculation of poetic metaphor. I can appreciate the subtlety and elegance of extended metaphors, but these scenes (and others) have too much going on. There are mixed metaphors, and then they have baby metaphors, and then they have incestuous grand-baby metaphors with those metaphors. It's like that.

The narrator-protagonist spends a lot of time contemplating the significance of certain conversations or events. Many scenes in the novel are punctuated with ominous portents, musings about the things the narrator wishes he'd known at the time, or generalities about The Way Things Affect Our Lives. Foreshadowing asides can build suspense when used in moderation, but Roberts employs them with such frequency, and at such length, that it removes me from the story, and I'm not as deeply involved with what's happening in the moment. When the narrator isn't fully present in his own story, it's hard for me to be.

Roberts's easy lyricism and his enthusiasm for the characters and their stories make this more of a mild annoyance than a true stumbling block, however. Yet even these qualities get out of hand. Roberts writes about Bombay and its inhabitants with the boundless enthusiasm of a schoolboy describing Kate Upton. His love for the city and its people is endearing, but like all static emotions, it gets stale, and it frequently feels naive. Lin has an almost supernatural gift for perceiving the innate goodness in the people around him, and it turns out that most of the people around him are innately good. I found myself hoping for more complexity and nuance, especially in Lin's relationship with Abdel Khader Khan, the local criminal overlord.

Lin is instantly drawn to Khaderbhai (as he is to many other characters), and Khader is full of the charisma and magnanimity we'd expect from any good don and guided by a precise moral compass. Lin idolizes Khader, and in his recounting, Khader is more of a kindly guru than a crime lord. That's not to say that crime lords can't be kind or wise, but the fact that Khader has so many people under his thumb is glossed over too easily for most of the book. As a result, the character, and Lin's puppy-dog loyalty toward him, feel shallow.

The characters (particularly Khader) frequently engage in meaning-of-life-type discussions. I loved the discourse in The Name of the Rose, but here, again, things go a little too far. Too many of these conversations become one-sided to the point that they seem more geared towards proving to the reader how clever the characters are than providing thoughtful characterization or meaningful conflict. And, unfortunately, they sometimes involve nonsensical remarks like, "Perhaps mathematics itself is a kind of stubbornness, do you think?"

No, but finishing the book was.

The German edition has an elephant on the cover. I do like elephants.